One day a old man went up to a pond. All of a sudden the water started to
move . A enormous worm fish came out of no where . So he took it home and cook it for tea . Every day he will go. There to catch a fish.the pond is 10km . The next day 3million fish were born in 5 hour ."I could not believe how much were born in that much hours he said his self I wish I had all the worm fish in the pound but when he passed away the fish were never seen again
What an interesting story, I'm not sure I would like to eat a worm fish! I like the way you have managed to create a complete story with your 100 words, from the very beginning where you introduced the man to the very end when he died. That's really quite tricky, well done!
ReplyDeleteNext time check your punctuation before you post, you seem to have some extra full stops that have snuck in!